I'm afraid I don't know much about home-made mixes, as I'm in the UK where we generally have a range of good pre-made mixes. It's also been a long while since I had hybrids myself, but keeping a low-sugar diet is important, so perhaps remove the raisin and carrot, as they're high in sugar. Broccoli and other low-sugar veg should be good, though.
What I would suggest is having a look at the ingredients of the mixes recommended here (such as
this hybrid dwarf hamster mix from Rodipet), and look at the threads posted here in the past (
like this one) about home made mixes. Be advised that home-made mixes require a lot of research to be done to get the right nutrients, and can be expensive, so even in those threads people say to use pre-made mixes.
One thing I do remember is that fenugreek seeds can be given to hybrids, although probably just as a treat (maybe 5 a day at most?). It has the double benefit of lowering blood sugar levels (apparently! Please do your own research!), while also making your hammy smell like curry. =) Also, I remember linseeds/flaxseeds being recommended for diabetic and diabetic-prone dwarves.