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caerleon
08-04-2010, 11:52 AM
Wishes
I wish I could have told you,
in words you'd understand,
I wanted you to stay with me.
This wasn't what I'd planned.
I wish somehow to tell you,
How empty I now feel.
A part of me went with you,
A part that time can't heal.
I wish I'd once more hear you,
as in the morning you would stir,
could hold you on my lap again
and stroke your lovely fur.
I wish that you could make me see
A way through all the pain,
and that I did not let you down
but set you free again.
I wish I had you back with me,
to fill this empty space.
But one day we'll be together
in a far, far better place.

starbug
08-04-2010, 11:54 AM
Oh, caerleon, that is beautiful and so moving. Thank you for sharing it.

Humphrey Furball
08-04-2010, 11:55 AM
It seems to be the evening for emotional words! A lovely poem for anyone who has lost a pet, thanks for sharing it.

shazzy
08-04-2010, 12:12 PM
Yes, thats really nice - exactly the words I had when losing my Little Mo, but she heard and brought Daisy to me :)

fluffymunchkins
08-04-2010, 12:21 PM
That sent shivers down my spine, really touched my heart.
Reminds me of how i felt when i lost Dot xx

helenp
08-04-2010, 01:50 PM
Oh that's lovely, it's made me cry, thinking of the furbabies I have lost.

princess-rhi89
08-04-2010, 02:01 PM
awww thats so sweet, im already an emotional wreck right now, so this set me right off but in a good way, its such a lovely tribute to any pet xxx

Hope
08-05-2010, 02:04 AM
Thats really lovely x

caerleon
08-05-2010, 07:27 AM
glad you all like it, makes me cry too, i found it after i lost one of rabbits and it really summed up how i was feeling.

suga
08-05-2010, 09:37 AM
Who was the author of the words - I'd like to read more of their work.
thanks for sharing sugax

caerleon
08-05-2010, 10:22 AM
i dont know im afraid i 'borrowed' it from another forum,just tried googling it but cant find anything sorry.