Biscuit, thank you for sharing your creative story with us. You have a talent for dramatic writing. This is a wonderful story that keeps drawing you in the more you read it. I love your descriptions as it makes the entire story more believable and paints vivid pictures in my mind. I love the bonds that you are establishing between the different hams, the suspense, and the adventure. This is a great beginning of what I am sure will continue to be a really exciting story. I really hope that you will post more of Star's thrilling adventure. Please don't keep us on this cliffhanger for too long, lol. I want to know what happens next and how it all ends.
